Die Martin Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 1 month agoWho?sh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square10linkfedilinkarrow-up1402arrow-down116
arrow-up1386arrow-down1imageWho?sh.itjust.worksDie Martin Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 1 month agomessage-square10linkfedilink
minus-squareslaneesh_is_right@lemmy.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up17arrow-down1·1 month agoIt’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
minus-squareqarbone@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·edit-21 month agoThe bones are good but the set up is lacking. It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself. For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: my wife: …I swear to God, Jon. Don’t.
It’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
The bones are good but the set up is lacking.
It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself.
For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: